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導(dǎo)語(yǔ):小必相信大家郵件發(fā)的不少,但是你只知道怎么給你的外教老師發(fā)郵件嗎?
Dear ***,
Hope you are doing well.
This is Peter, one of your students in Zhengzhou University. I would much appreciate if you could kindly help me.
I am planning to continue my study in Tongji University, and attached is my self introduction. Could you please kindly look through my paper, and revise accordingly. This is an important document in my application. I will recite it at the time of the interview. I have tried my best to write, and I know there must be many places need to be corrected. It will be great if you can add some personalized sentence.
Thanks a lot for your due attention to this letter. I am looking forward to your prompt reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
親愛(ài)的* * *,
希望你一切都好。
我是彼得,你在鄭州大學(xué)的學(xué)生之一。如果你能幫助我,我將非常感激。
我計(jì)劃繼續(xù)在同濟(jì)大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí),附件是我的自我介紹。請(qǐng)您把我的論文看一遍,并做相應(yīng)的修改。這是我申請(qǐng)的一份重要文件。我會(huì)在面試的時(shí)候背下來(lái)。我已經(jīng)盡了最大的努力去寫(xiě),我知道肯定有很多地方需要改正。如果你能添加一些個(gè)性化的句子就太好了。
非常感謝您對(duì)這封信的關(guān)注。我期待著您的迅速回復(fù),在您方便的時(shí)候。
你的真誠(chéng),
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